I started laughing.
Not because the subject was funny, but because the writing was careless. Procedural nonsense, genre confusion, characters behaving like plot furniture — the usual things that make a supposed thriller accidentally comic.
And then, somewhere along the way, I stopped laughing.
Because the problem was no longer incompetence. It was something quieter, and worse. It was a refusal to think through the consequences of what the story was claiming.
This essay reflects on my response to the JioHotstar series Mrs Deshpande…not as a review, but more as a study in storytelling choices.
This is not one story. It is four incompatible stories stitched together.
When reduced to plot, the series wants to be:
- a child abuse and repressed memory trauma story
- a vigilante justice story
- a copycat killer / idolization story
- a family melodrama about mother, son, and generational reckoning
Each of these could work on its own. Together, they cancel each other out because they require opposite psychological rules.
The plot asks us to believe things that are internally contradictory. You cannot simultaneously write deeply repressed trauma and high-functioning vigilante selectivity. A vigilante requires awareness, intent, and ideological clarity. Repression requires fragmentation, avoidance, and dissociation. The story wants both at the same time.
And then there’s the copycat killer track. A thriller dies a quick death when the killer and the copycat emotionally validate each other. That is exactly what happens here.
Tejas, the investigating officer, is repeatedly described as righteous, conflicted, and duty-bound. But what we see on screen tells a different story. He has conflicts of interest at every stage, assaults suspects, withholds information from his team, and contemplates extrajudicial killing. This isn’t a moral conflict. It reads as incompetence and emotional instability.
The grandfather arc fares no better. It offers closure without consequence…a convenient end that avoids moral complexity rather than confronting it.
Why the early laughter felt justified
At first, the show felt like a thriller assembled from spare parts.
Twenty-five years in prison and not a single grey hair. Flawless makeup intact after three days of third-degree interrogation, complete with an artistically placed trickle of blood. Cops going solo when backup is offered. Arrests happening in pubs with the casualness of ordering a drink. Prison guards being fed food that conveniently puts them to sleep so the prisoner can step out for a stroll and get acquainted with her daughter-in-law.
These things were ridiculous but harmless.
Bad craft can be laughed at.
Where the laughter became uneasy
As the story unfolded, the laughter began to feel misplaced. Because the mess wasn’t limited to plot mechanics anymore.
The writing started leaning on incest, trauma, and abuse. Not with care, but as convenient explanations. Murder in self-defence becomes a trigger not for psychological collapse, but for the protagonist to turn into a vigilante killer. There is no exploration of how she makes these choices, how she lives with them, or what they cost her.
This is where comedy stops being harmless.
The psychological lie
The story asks us to believe that a woman who suffered repeated abuse by her father could repress it so completely that marriage, intimacy, childbirth, and motherhood left no trace until a psychiatrist conveniently unlocked memory decades later.
This isn’t complexity. It’s avoidance. Trauma doesn’t work like a light switch, and repression doesn’t politely step aside when the plot needs clarity.
The mother problem
The moment the story establishes her as a loving mother, it locks itself into a truth it never honours.
A mother does not remain emotionally intact after discovering that her child was raised by the man who abused her. She does not calmly process that information. She does not postpone it. She does not philosophise around it.
Maternal fear is not measured. It is feral.
Yet there is not even a mention of it not in her words, not in her thoughts. She never asks her son how his childhood was. Whether he was happy. Whether he felt safe.
That isn’t detachment. It’s a fundamental misreading of motherhood.
If the story wanted her to be a detached vigilante, it should have committed to that. If it wanted her to be a mother who loves her son above all else, it should have honoured the implications. Mixing the two results is confusing and…jarring.
Some stories simply shouldn’t be touched if the writers don’t know how to handle the weight they carry.
Why this isn’t “bad writing”
This isn’t bad writing. Bad writing tries and fails.
This is lazy writing. Writing that stops interrogating itself once the outline works. Writing that relies on actors, background score (as mediocre as it is), and sentiment to carry ideas it hasn’t fully thought through. Writing that borrows the language of trauma, justice, and motherhood without understanding what those words demand of a story.
I started laughing because the show was clumsy.
I stopped because it was careless.
Stories can survive incompetence. They cannot survive dishonesty. Especially when they use the language of trauma, motherhood, and justice without respecting its weight.
Some material demands thought before spectacle.
This story chose speed over responsibility.









